100 Word Challenge: Tabitha
One sunny morning a little girl called Molly and her dad went fishing. They caught the deadliest fish on the planet. They were so pleased with themselves because they had tried for so long to catch this seriously dangerous fish! They took the fish to the scientists who had given them the mission to find the fish in the first place. The scientists were very excited. Suddenly, without warning the fish grew in size and attacked a scientist. Polly, the scientist was in big trouble and needed to go to the hospital urgently….
Interesting story Tabitha, it definitely makes me want to read more. I would have liked to read a little more about what the fish looked like, using some really good adjectives. Well done!
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