It was a fresh Saturday morning and Harvey was going fishing with his father. Once they were out on the lake Harveys father told him a rumor that there was only one fish in the lake, and that they were going to catch it.
” Fish and chips for lunch” said Harvey’s father. Two hours went by and Harvey was getting bored. Suddenly there was a tug on the line and a big pink fish jumped out of the water and into Harvey’s arms Harvey dropped the fish and his dad said “so much for Fish and Chips for our lunch!
Lauren,
ReplyDeleteNice humour in your story! I enjoyed reading it. Next time they'll get their fish and chips I hope!
Just watch some of your punctuation (especially lines 2 and 6)
Nice write!
Laura A, Team100
Hi Lauren
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely 100 word challenge and I really enjoyed reading it. Your use of speech is very effective throughout the story and really adds to it. I love your final line "so much for fish and chips for lunch". It created a picture in my mind of Harvey's dad and his face when he saw that the one and only fish was gone. I also love how you started the story describing the day as a "fresh Saturday morning". Well done and keep up the good work.
Ms O'Keeffe (Team 100wc)