It was a windy Sunday morning Dad had just gone out to buy a paper from the local shop.
I didn’t like being home alone very much I normally watch tv but not today.
The night before I watched a horror film. I don’t like admitting it but I was scared.
I just sat in the old arm chair by the window, which was covered in condensation.
Suddenly I heard a crack it made me jump out my seat. Dad walked in and pointed at the window there was a huge crack in it and a stone on the windowsill.
Hi Lauren and Jack. I loved the detail of "I just sat in the old arm chair by the window, which was covered in condensation." Description like this really helps the reader to picture the scene.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget that if you want to join two sentences together you need to use a connective. Have a think about what connective you could use in the first sentence to join "It was a windy Sunday morning." and "Dad had just gone out to buy a paper from the local shop."